🖤 How to Write a Male Character with Depth (Eli & Sebastian Case Study)

Katrina De Milano
25 июн.
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Not a cliché. Not a fantasy. A character who breathes.

We’ve all met him.

The bad boy with a cigarette and a secret.

The golden boy who can do no wrong.

The tortured artist who stares out windows and doesn’t talk about his past.

They’re familiar. But they’re not real.

A great male lead doesn’t just lean against doorframes and speak in riddles.

He carries history. He wrestles with shame. He doesn’t always say the right thing — or know what he wants.

If you want to write a male character who lingers after the last page, it’s not about charisma.

It’s about layers.

Let’s break it down — through the lens of two very different brothers: Eli and Sebastian Blackborn.

🔥 1. Choose complexity over charm

Charm is easy. It sparkles. But it fades.

What stays with readers is contradiction — the storm beneath the surface.

Sebastian Blackborn is sharp, magnetic, impossible to ignore.

He owns every room he walks into. Until he doesn’t.

Under the control, there’s chaos.

Under the anger, there’s loss.

He’s spent his whole life protecting his twin — and in doing so, lost pieces of himself.

He believes vulnerability makes him weak.

He fights love like it’s a threat.

But in the quiet, when no one’s watching — you see the cracks.

And that’s where the story lives.

🌘 2. Let silence speak

Not every male lead has to be loud.

Sometimes, it’s the ones who don’t speak that hurt the most.

Eli Blackborn isn’t a talker.

But when he looks at Emma — really looks — it’s like the whole scene exhales.

There’s regret in his stillness.

Conflict in the way he holds a pencil.

Grief in the spaces between his words.

You don’t need paragraphs of internal monologue.

Sometimes the most powerful line is the one he can’t say.

Let him be quiet — and let that quiet mean something.

🧩 3. Build him from the inside out

Forget “tall, dark, and mysterious.”

Start with what hurts.

Ask:

What truth about himself does he refuse to face?
What was the first thing he misunderstood about love?
Who did he fail to protect — and how does that shape him now?
What secret would destroy him if it came out?

Eli is stitched together with guilt he never asked to carry.

Sebastian is made of fire and fear — and can’t tell where one ends and the other begins.

They’re not “bad boys” or “good boys.”

They’re people.

And that’s what makes them unforgettable.

🪶 4. Let him feel

Boys cry.

Boys grieve, freeze, shut down.

They lash out. They pull away. They hold on too tight.

Let them.

Let your male characters feel deeply — even if they don’t know how to show it. Especially if no one ever taught them how.

Emotion doesn’t make them weaker.

It makes them real.

✍️ 5. Use these questions to deepen him:

What part of himself does he secretly hate — but can’t let go of?
How does he act when he’s afraid? Does he hide it or wear it?
Who gets past his defenses without even trying?
What’s one lie he tells himself to get through the day?
Who is he when no one needs him to be anything?

These are the moments that make a character human — not just hot.

💬 Your Turn

Have you ever written a male character who surprised you?

Who cracked open in a scene and showed you something raw — something real?

Tell me: who are the guys who live on your pages — not just pose in them?

Let’s move past tropes.

Let’s write men who ache, who choose, who change.

Let’s write them alive.