🧠 How to Create Realistic Characters in Fantasy and YA Fiction

Katrina De Milano
22 нояб. 2025 г.
3 мин. чтения

Because readers don’t fall in love with settings — they fall in love with people

You can have the most breathtaking world — skies full of dragons, cities suspended in trees, entire nations ruled by living shadows — and still lose your reader if your characters feel hollow.

Because no matter how magical the setting is, the reader connects first and foremost to people.

To voice.

To vulnerability.

To contradiction.

And the truth is: the more impossible the world, the more real your characters need to feel — to ground the reader emotionally, to create stakes that matter, and to carry the story across every strange and shifting landscape.

So how do you make characters breathe — even in a world that doesn’t?

💔 1. Give them something tender to protect

Whether they’re a battle-scarred warrior or a teenage necromancer — what is the one soft thing they’re holding onto?

A sibling they would die for
A memory they can’t forget
A fear they hide under sarcasm
A hope they never admit out loud

Real characters aren’t built from tropes — they’re built from tensions.

What do they show to the world, and what do they guard?

The contrast is where the heartbeat lives.

⚔️ 2. Let them make the wrong choices — for the right reasons

Perfect characters are forgettable.

Flawed characters are unforgettable.

Give them motives that make emotional sense, even when their actions are messy.

Maybe your heroine betrays someone — because she believes it will save a life.

Maybe your villain hesitates — because a small part of him still remembers what it felt like to be kind.

The goal isn’t to justify everything.

It’s to make readers understand — and maybe even ache for — every step they take.

🎭 3. Anchor the fantastical in the familiar

Your characters might live in a world of skyships or cursed forests — but they should still argue with their mother, fall for the wrong person, struggle with trust, laugh in the dark.

Emotional truth translates across worlds.

Give your characters:

Relationships that evolve
Internal contradictions
Private moments they’d never share aloud
Emotional reactions that don’t feel scripted

Ask not just “what do they do?” — but “why do they do it that way?”

📖 4. Let their arc change the world — not just the plot

Your fantasy world is a stage, but your character should leave footprints on it.

Let their growth shift things. Let their failures cost something real. Let their choices ripple outward — changing not just the outcome of a battle, but the emotional tone of the ending.

A good plot is satisfying.

A good character arc is unforgettable.

🕯 5. Know what they’ll never say aloud — and write around it

Sometimes the most human thing a character can do is not speak.

What do they long for but can’t admit?

What do they regret, but can’t forgive themselves for?

What would break them if someone guessed?

These are the silences that define people.

Let your characters keep secrets — even from you.

Let their actions contradict their words. Let their pain leak out sideways.

That’s how real people behave.

Even when they carry swords or ride phoenixes.

💬 Your Turn

What makes a character feel real to you — even in the most fantastical worlds?

Have you ever written someone who surprised you?

Let’s talk about the magic of building people — not just heroes, not just roles, but people who stay with us long after the final page.